Somehow the shortness and clearness and simplicity of this really make it so strong. I love the first line, and totally agree with the idea of the poem!
You could ask for money and security, you could ask solidarity. You could ask a romantic talk, or a fantastic walk. You could ask a poetic meaning, a political leaning and you could ask for spiritual healing or soulful meaning……. you could ask.
Short and sweet.
Thank you.
I love your poem with few words, they say so much…
Thanks so much. Every now and then I like to write about my deceased soul mate–may he rest in peace.
kind of sweet 🙂
Thanks, Ian. 🙂
Your beautiful few words ask a very heavy question.
Tell me more…
Somehow the shortness and clearness and simplicity of this really make it so strong. I love the first line, and totally agree with the idea of the poem!
Thank you. That means a lot to me.
A few words that says a whole lot 🙂 I love it!
Thank you so much, VP. 🙂
You could ask for money and security, you could ask solidarity. You could ask a romantic talk, or a fantastic walk. You could ask a poetic meaning, a political leaning and you could ask for spiritual healing or soulful meaning……. you could ask.
Ah . . . That’s beautiful. In this case, his spirit lives on and his soul never dies.
Cheers, to forever!
Cheers! 🙂
Short and significant. Well expressed in only a few words. 🙂
Thank you, Raani. I used to tell him that he was the greatest guy in the world…and I meant it.
It’s important to tell others about our emotions towards them. Some people are unable to do so, I’m happy you can!!
Thanks, Raani. 🙂