she peers into a comma’s misfortune
too long a dig
to the bottom
of a heart’s quarry
where word associations rest
rotting like sweet apples
intertwined within
century-old roots
she smiles
grateful for her lack of utterances
and His grace-filled promise
by mary ann blinkhorn
mypenandme 
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Thank you very much! 🙂
This is excellent–both poetically, and the message. You know me by another name, I’m back again–to follow…
Thank you. I’m following you too.
pure poetry !
Thank you! 🙂
Nice! Not been seeing you lately. Thank you for liking my poem!
…been working on my screenplay every chance I get. Nice to see you.
A really beautiful study of how you can stir unconscious associations with poetry. Lovely.
Thank’s very much. 🙂
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to the bottom
of a heart’s quarry
Great imagery. I have a place like this. It is a place of negativity but still a quarry which is a source of rebuilding material in my thinking.
construction vs. desconstruction… 🙂 Thanks so much for stopping by, Carl. 🙂
I love the first line, “she peers into a comma’s misfortune”, makes me think of how I feel sometimes when I’m writing, staring at the page, digging for the words which only exist in my heart and mind.
Thank you. I just subscribed to your blog. 🙂
Thanks! I hope you enjoy it.
Lovely writing. Thanks for stopping by my blog and your like. Hope you have a wonderful day.
My pleasure. Thanks for your kind words.
Thank you for visiting and the like of my post “Buds and the Blue Sky”.
My pleasure. 🙂
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