16 thoughts on “pause

  1. This reads like stacked haikus, creating a complex duplex, a tenancy in common. Both could stand alone, but together they shed light on each other and become greater than the sum of their parts. Strange comment, eh? Was this your intent? Just curious.

  2. I like Ms. Hoffman’s intelligent remark – ditto
    Enjoyed this very much

  3. Maxi says:

    Paper-thin doubt can carry the most weight, M.A.
    blessings ~ maxi

  4. Eric says:

    Enjoyed this poem very much, Mary Ann. Thanks for sharing! 🙂

  5. Tami McVey says:

    Loved this MA! I can feel the sentiment, and share it with you 🙂

  6. Charley McKelvy says:

    Soothing thought for a serene Sunday afternoon by the lake.

  7. nothing lightweight about this! BEAUTIFUL !

  8. Raani York says:

    Short but impressive. I really like it!!

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