paper-thin doubt
brushes up against psyche
leaving paper trail
small of back
carrying the brunt
in easy chair
by mary ann blinkhorn
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paper-thin doubt
brushes up against psyche
leaving paper trail
small of back
carrying the brunt
in easy chair
by mary ann blinkhorn
mypenandme 
This reads like stacked haikus, creating a complex duplex, a tenancy in common. Both could stand alone, but together they shed light on each other and become greater than the sum of their parts. Strange comment, eh? Was this your intent? Just curious.
This was my intent. Thank you, Jilanne. 🙂
I like Ms. Hoffman’s intelligent remark – ditto
Enjoyed this very much
Thank you. It was a true story written in the moment.
Paper-thin doubt can carry the most weight, M.A.
blessings ~ maxi
That’s so true! 🙂
Enjoyed this poem very much, Mary Ann. Thanks for sharing! 🙂
Thanks for reading and commenting, Eric. 🙂
Loved this MA! I can feel the sentiment, and share it with you 🙂
Thanks, Tami. 🙂
Soothing thought for a serene Sunday afternoon by the lake.
*smiling*
nothing lightweight about this! BEAUTIFUL !
I’m so glad you liked it. Thank you. 🙂
Short but impressive. I really like it!!
Thank you, Raani. Have a good night.