tea cup
suspended in space
bone blue
china green
black silence
how your zigzag red-eyed words
quickly fill a page
puff up in smoke
dissipate
grab onto the wall
hang on
or climb over it
by mary ann blinkhorn
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The rhythm and spaces of your words – the reaching toward visual integrity – the images evoked – pure blissful reading – thank you for your art…
Thank you for your encouragement. 🙂
hah. nice one, ms. bee!
Thanks! I visited your page on ReverbNation the other day. 🙂 Hope you are well.
I’m climbing over the wall, M.A. wanna see what’s on the other side.
Blessings ~ Maxi
Good move. 🙂
Blessings, M.A.
Love the “bridge” in addition to the wall. The colors. Nice shape on the page. I’m going to do all three, grab hold, hang on, and climb over. :o)
*smiling*
oohhh its so inviting!
Nice to see you, Deborah. 🙂
clever!
Thank you! 🙂
Your breaking up of the lines works very effectively, here, creates a halting feeling. k.
Thanks. I enjoyed your last poem. 🙂
Thank you, Mary Ann – I am feeling very red-eyed – tired at the moment!
It must be from all of that great writing you’ve been doing lately. Hope you get some well-deserved rest this weekend. M.A.
Very tight and well-written poem!
Thanks for taking the time to read and comment. I appreciate it. 🙂
Thank you for following HoB. Much appreciated! I’ll be hanging around here…