17 thoughts on “clouds

  1. Wow… I really like your writing style… in fact my style of poetry is somewhat similar… I love this.. great work

  2. alvason says:

    “now shove off” … yeah! that’s the way to go 🙂

  3. pennycoho says:

    I like it! Yes indeed!

  4. Don MacIver says:

    Love it, especially the close Mary Ann!

  5. laurie27wsmith says:

    Do you read any of Sylvia Plath’s works Mary Ann?
    Laurie

  6. gacochran says:

    Thanks for stopping by and liking “Weathered Barriers”. Thanks also for sharing your work.

  7. Great thoughtful poem ~ I love that you adjust the words to say I respect you ~ OUCH!

  8. This poem made me laugh and gave me strength. You rock!

    • mypenandme says:

      The only way that a particular person is going to pull the wool over my eyes is if I become a sheep–and I don’t plan to become a sheep anytime soon. Ha! Thanks for your comments.

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