day, echo and second coat

walking along

the narrowed areas

of an inspired highway

i see a corn stalk

then another

silly of them to think

they’d go unnoticed


by mary ann blinkhorn


12 thoughts on “day, echo and second coat

  1. I suppose nature is inconspicuous to most people…but the poet’s eye captures everything beautiful…

  2. Lori Lipsky says:

    The poem is a delight. Is the title supposed to be obscure? I keep trying to figure it out.

    • mypenandme says:

      My primary goal when writing is to record my consciousness–to record whatever thoughts, sounds, images, emotions, etc., I am feeling/envisioning at the moment. The title reflects this.

  3. Libby says:

    So simple and so stunning!

  4. Wonderful perspective, thank you!

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