taking steep steps
through shallow waters
i find my dignity
REM sleep
batting eyelashes
new scenes presiding
firm mattress flips outΒ the guy
transforms him into a flying man
with plot-ripe intentions
a future superhero
who lacerates all previously-written scripts
from now on
it’s high concept all the way
new scene:
he pulls you along through the marigolds
by mary ann blinkhorn
written for Three Word Wednesday at http://www.threewordwednesday.com/
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‘with plot-ripe intentions’ π
Writing a poem with the word “ripe” in it was challenging. Lol…
I bet it was…
fab work as usual.
Gavin.
Thanks Gavin. Did you post any new photos? I’ll have to look. π
Yes. Some night shots.
G.
I just viewed them. They’re very cool.
I love the form of this poem…magnificent π
Wow! Thank you very much, Michael. π
Quite a story you’ve told there, and told very well.
Thank you. It’s mostly a story about screenwriting.
I like it! Perfect description of dream reality. Funny, I also felt the need to use “ripe” in a hyphenated form. Very nice.
Thank you. What a magnificient poem you wrote. I was just at your page.
Reblogged this on Teacher as Transformer and commented:
A nice sentiment for Thursday morning.
Thank you, Ivon. What a lovely compliment. Wishing you a wonderful day. π
I had a great start and it unfolded from there.
At first I was grinning, then I sighed!
Keep smiling, Resa, and thanks for stopping by.
Wonderful description, very On target! Thank you ~ Blessings Deborah
π Thank you, my friend.
you have written it beautifully…magical it was.. π
Why, thank you. π
Welcome to my space and many thanks for liking my posts …keep dropping by..
I will surely do that with pleasure. π
‘Battling Eyelashes’…….. I’ll tell mine! Lovely work.
Oh I like that. Thanks.
I love the line, firm mattress flips out the guy
transforms him into a flying man
with plot-ripe intentions” I almost laughed out loud at the visual. Thanks for visiting my site as well I’ll be following you. π
Thanks so much! π
Who hasn’t had a weird dream like that! So funny!!! π
I’ve been having a lot of weird dreams lately, and remembering them.
It’s fun when you can capture some of that weirdness. I rarely can.
Very beautifully done.I like it.
Thank you, katzideas. π
A new mattress can be very potent. k.
I like your comments… Ha!
Lovely π
Thank you! π
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Thank you for the nomination, and for your kind words. π