jingles in the sunlight

horn fly

jingles in sunlight

poised on a cow’s bell

zzzzzzzzzz

tick-tock-tick-tock

ding-a-ling-a-ling-a-ling

snort

“Wha?”

tweet tweet, tweet tweet, chirp

vaarroom . . .

distant horn sounds

vaarroom . . .

tweet tweet

zzzzz zzzzz zzzzz

“A fly?”

swat, swat, slap . . . .

long yawn and sigh

eyes closing

tick-tock-tick-tock-tick-tock-tick-tock

zzzzzzzzzz

in a crazy mood

eating gingersnaps

indigo blue light below

ding-dong

snort

“Wha?”

rat-a-tat . . . rat-a-tat

bang-bang-bang-bang-bang

“Yeh, yeh, yeh, I’m coming!  Grrrrrrr!”

tramp tramp tramp tramp

sound of door opening . . .

“Are you coming to work today?”

“Oh my stars!  Yes.  I’m sorry!  I’ll be there in fifteen minutes.”

 

 

by mary ann blinkhorn

-a very silly poem, please forgive me!  Lol…

 

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36 thoughts on “jingles in the sunlight

  1. leander42 says:

    There’s many of us done this methinks – though not all would admit to it. Very funny and strangely astute.

  2. mj says:

    a very interesting piece of expression… yes! I do like it!

  3. unfetteredbs says:

    silly yes but that is why I love it…great narrative!

  4. poetryplusuk says:

    It is an interesting piece with use of onomatopoeia. Sometimes we just need some sound to make sense. Last weekend, I almost bought a mini cow bell originated from New Zealand,which surely will help me understand this poem better.

  5. Fun! And a perfect poem to teach onomatopoeia to writing students, too! 🙂

  6. You warned us that fhis was going to contain a lot of sounds! You did not dissapoint. I really like this poem!

  7. Ian Moone says:

    A nice bit of fun this

  8. I’m pretty sure that an appropriate comment would be……… zzzzzzzzzzzzzzz. Oh, sorry. I fell asleep. Now what was I going to say?

  9. I relate to this morning jingles~ how very clever! Loved it! ~Deborah

  10. boomiebol says:

    I love it lol…this can be so anyone 🙂

  11. elizabeth says:

    An absolutely brilliant poem! I can see this as a Children’s Picture Book. Well done 🙂

  12. latefruit says:

    Delightfully silly!

  13. Sadly, another Russel Ray camping trip comes to an end………………..

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