sitting at table
rose and blue laugh merrily
as picasso
playing with sugar cubes
trembles with joy
and feeling de light
escapes into state-of-the-art idea
he dampens cloth napkin
with cold tea
wipes his brow
please keep this to yourselves, he says
we’re in this together
by mary ann blinkhorn
Written for: http://www.threewordwednesday.com
I enjoyed your poetry. Great name you have. MaryAnn(at Writers Daybook)
Thank you. I was just going to check out yours and then the phone rang. I will do so, now. 🙂
This is so sweet! 🙂 Very enjoyable.
Thank you, Pete. This was fun! 🙂
Very good!
Thanks, Rick. 🙂
plnk plunk kchnk circlecirclecirclecirclecircle knnlanck rnnk phsssssvpf chnng ahhhhhhh! That hit the spot!
Now how about a nice slice of guitar?
Cheers!
We’re in this together… that line makes it!
*smiling* – Thank you, Kim.
enjoyed finding the three words site today – and now closing my day with your poem – delightful
I found the three word site today, too. 🙂 Thanks for your kind words. 🙂
I like this:
“as picasso
playing with sugar cubes
trembles with joy”
Thanks, Shawna. You never know–Picasso’s thoughts on cubism could have been inspired while drinking tea. Thanks for reading and commenting. 🙂
..you know – I think this what transcending poetry is all about. This little poem blows me away… oh my. perfection
You’re always too kind, Abdul, but I appreciate it.
cute one. loved the light mood it created.
Thanks. It was fun, participating in threewordwednesday.com
It’s very funny to think of Picasso dabbling in de light. K.
Ha! I enjoyed writing that line. Thanks. 🙂
Haha! I liked this very much! Especially:
“…picasso
playing with sugar cubes
trembles with joy…”
That’s a great image. I enjoyed it very much.
I’m so very glad. Thank you so much for reading and commenting. 🙂
As enigmatic as a real Picasso.
*smiling*
Do you know this site?
http://clutchingatstraws.wordpress.com/
I think he might be interested in publishing this … and/or other pieces of yours. Of course, I don’t know whether *you* would be interested in *that*. 🙂
I’m interested! 🙂