round and round

shake the living daylights

watch stars falling


never hitting sidewalk

for they’ve joined the rain


round and round

by mary ann blinkhorn

20 thoughts on “round and round

  1. alvason says:

    love this! very evocative, feel like I have been there many times!

  2. Pete Armetta says:

    Sweet moment captured here no doubt. 🙂

  3. David says:

    Love the mood perfectly captured

  4. P. C. Zick says:

    I love cliches (shake the living daylights) turned on their head to capture an entirely different feeling/meaning. Thanks!

  5. WONDERFUL images! Thank you for this, too. Sincerely Deborah

  6. Chrissy says:

    Loved it. I will follow you, especially since you are a fellow Canadian!

  7. ManicDdaily says:

    Lovely – this could almost be made into a children’s picture book. (I don’t mean that as any kind of insult–just the idea of daylights and stars is so much fun.) k.

  8. Gorgeous poem!!! 🙂

  9. WONDERFUL ~again ! THANK you dear.

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