24 thoughts on “influential art

  1. fiztrainer says:

    I love when so few words can conjure up so much visual. Love your blog. Thanks for coming by and checking out mine. I look forward to keeping up with your posts. πŸ˜€

  2. ladyfi says:

    Heartfelt! So few words can sum up all that pain. Well done.

  3. Matt says:

    I LOVE the title!! πŸ™‚ Thanks for your interest in http://mistergkids.com ! Come back soon!

  4. ManicDdaily says:

    This is wonderful. Really gripping and short and strong. One question- do you want to have the first line not in bold and the rest in bold? It’s interesting. I wasn’t sure if intentional. I’m not sure about it myself as I wasn’t sure if the first line were title — on the other hand it does focus one’s attention and sort of goes with the mashing through the sieve–k.

  5. P. C. Zick says:

    You show what I believe – words are mighty powerful tools.

    • mypenandme says:

      Thank you for your encouragement and kind words. You are my 200th follower on “mypenandme” – hard to believe. Wishing you a wonderful day. πŸ™‚

  6. William Stadler says:

    very nice! so much meaning in just a few lines. i’d like to call it poetic, but that’s exactly what is!

  7. dmpoetry says:

    simple, elegant, nice image!

  8. Nyx says:

    I can actually feel the passing through a sieve. Kudos!

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