tea cup
suspended in space
bone blue
china green
black silence
how your zigzag red-eyed words
quickly fill a page
puff up in smoke
dissipate
grab onto the wall
hang on
or climb over it
by mary ann blinkhorn
The rhythm and spaces of your words – the reaching toward visual integrity – the images evoked – pure blissful reading – thank you for your art…
Thank you for your encouragement.
hah. nice one, ms. bee!
Thanks! I visited your page on ReverbNation the other day.
Hope you are well.
I’m climbing over the wall, M.A. wanna see what’s on the other side.
Blessings ~ Maxi
Good move.
Blessings, M.A.
Love the “bridge” in addition to the wall. The colors. Nice shape on the page. I’m going to do all three, grab hold, hang on, and climb over.
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*smiling*
oohhh its so inviting!
Nice to see you, Deborah.
clever!
Thank you!
Your breaking up of the lines works very effectively, here, creates a halting feeling. k.
Thanks. I enjoyed your last poem.
Thank you, Mary Ann – I am feeling very red-eyed – tired at the moment!
It must be from all of that great writing you’ve been doing lately. Hope you get some well-deserved rest this weekend. M.A.
Very tight and well-written poem!
Thanks for taking the time to read and comment. I appreciate it.
Thank you for following HoB. Much appreciated! I’ll be hanging around here…